January 02, 2006
NewYears
Glistening tears filled her eyes, and rolled down her baby soft, rosy red cheeks. She closed her eyes, tightly, thinking about what she had done. Opening her eyes once more, she looked around the room. "i've ruined it, she said,"I've ruined every one's New Year." Her eyes, which were now streaming with tears, closed once more. "my year, full of hopes and dreams have gone down the drain. This year is going to be the worst year ever yet to come..."
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lol, you read this one to me, too
Chase looked at her through slighlty narrowed eyes. He sighed. "Well. No offense or anything but...you did kind of blow it." Rose lowered her eyes. Her tears began to drop steadily on the carpet, creating little domes of water below. " Oh not for everybody, of course not, you're fine, Rosie!" Chase put a large, muscled finger beneath her chin and lifted it."But" he whispered
you did sort of ruin it for me." Rose glanced into his face. His mouth was pressed into a crooked line of unconvincing guilt and his eyes, his big brown eyes said loud and clear ' You betrayed me! I thought you were worth more than that. But I was wrong.You wh*re.'
She couldn't stand it any more. " Maybe I could try again?" she said, forcing hopefulness into her body and trying to plug up her waterall of tears.
"Yes!" Chase exclaimed softly.
OMG! I luvs it!! Mj, you should really consider adding that!!
lol. maybe, it's a little...dramatic. lol JK!JK! i'll think about doing that
He took her slender hand in his, and led her up the stairs. About halfway up he stopped and turned to rose. "I love you, you know? " Rose turned up her face and smiled. Chase leaned forward and kissed her gently on the lips. Rose smiled wider. He slid his hands up her back and to the back of her neck. " I love you Rose" he murmured softly, moving his thumbs to the front of her neck. He slowly began to squeeze her neck.
Rose felt comfortable like that, that gentle, steady pressure was comforting. Pretty soon, she was so comfortable that she fell into a deep sleep.
A sleep from which she will never wake from again...
ooooooh... wonnnnnndeeeeeeerrrfulll... mj I command you to add this!!!!!!!!!!
lol
...~Insanity~...
Ñever ƒter
....never after??
Yeah.
what does it mean???
mj you need to update!!
I don't under stand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? why did she fall asleep? Why won't she wake?
wait....I got it(light bulb goes off) but why did he kill her? Did he ring in the new year with too much alcohol?
okay. let me explain. we just write random things and put them up for individual people to extract individual meaning from it. it doesn't have to make sense. thats why its so briliant. because this way of writing truly shows the writers ability and talent, not just the brilliance of the plot.
get it?
if not, I'll explain tomorrow.
spencer you must go to my blog you total hottie.
hem. you are screwed, I tell ya. SCREWED.
thanks that makes me feel so unscrewed.
why is she so screwed? I AM HOT!
i don't even know what all you people mean when you tell me im screwed. (;)
Spencer i did not say IF you are hot, i called you a hottie. you know what? face it. i will never change.
lol.
um.
hem.
bye bye dear.
....bye. you freako that thinks she's not screwed but she actually is.
brilliant lightbulbs are always screwed into their sockets.
AND about the reason he killed her. remember the "could i try again" part? that's the key to the reason.
now it makes even less sense!
*sigh*. ruthie TOLD me you had a brain........................?
maybe its vice versa.
jk! *screams*
boys just don't get it.
but how is the maby i could try again part incorporated with the fact that he killed her?
he killed her because she didn't do something right the FIRST time.
*sigh*
der.
i still don't get it.
ARGH. lol. okay, just think about all the things that she could possibly have done wrong the first time, and what it might have to do with him. big clue there: what it might have to do with him.
eew kamala.
spencer I thought you had a brain.
*snicker*. yeah, i think ruthie figured it out. but ruthie i only wrote it like that because it is something that happens in society. maybe not that extreme, but it happens.
what?
love?
hate?
WHAT....
now you have ME confused...
forgiving...
ohh.. I get it....
r u sure?
if u aren't, use the clue i gave spencer
MY MOUTH STINGS LIKE EVER LIVIN LOVING HECK!!!!
poor you...
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